While
they headed to soccer camp, Wayne realized that his dad bought the soccer
cleats only for his twin brother. He wasn’t angry. He wasn’t better than David
in soccer. That’s why his dad supported his brother and not him. The cleats
were very expensive and good. About 20 minutes later, the car
arrived to the soccer camp. David was very excited to play soccer at
the camp. When they went into the camp, they saw massive fields and a lot of
people. There were a few coaches, scouts and a lot of teenagers like them. He
was kind of scared and nervous, but he thought that it was an opportunity to
learn soccer. After a few minutes, the teenagers had a chance to show how good
they were. Usually, he was kind of good at showing skills to people. However,
he didn’t do well on it. So he was frustrated about it. Of course, his brother
got attention from the coaches and other teenager envied him. After a few
tests, the coaches separated them into several groups. Unluckily, Wayne and
David were on the same team. The head coach of the camp said that they were
going to have a tournament after a few days of practices. He also said that the
players who scored the most goals would receive a special prize. Everyone,
especially David was excited about it. In the practice, his coach and his
teammates were impressed with his brother’s soccer skill, and started to praise
him. He usually didn’t envy his brother. However, somehow his head was stuck
with some feeling. It was feeling that he hadn’t experienced for a long time.
He thought that his brother was better than him, because of the new cleats. He
started to practice harder and harder, so that he could get compliments from
other players. However, no one looked or cared about him. First he was very
angry, even though he admitted that he couldn’t be better than him. He was so
depressed that he stopped practicing. Then the head coach sat down next to him.
“ No one cares about you right now. However, if you continue to practice
hard, there will be a moment when everyone will notice and support you. So
don’t give up,” the coach said. Wayne’s heart began pumping hard. He had never
felt like that way before. He felt like he needed to do something. He got up
and started to practice again. A few days later, the tournament has begun.
David was the star player of the team, and Wayne was on the bench. His brother
scored 5 goals during first game. By the end of the tournament, their team was
playing in the finals. They were losing by 1 point, and his brother needed to
score one more goal to get a special prize. In 87 minutes, a player from
another team tackled his brother. They got an opportunity to score a goal from
a free kick. Wayne saw that his brother was walking strangely. He asked the coach to call his
brother. When the coach checked the right foot of his brother, it was swelled a
lot. His coach asked the referee to substitute David. When Wayne looked at his
brother, he was very depressed. Wayne asked his brother for the new cleats. His
brother looked at him with curiosity, but handed them to him. When Wayne put on
the cleats, he said to his coach that he didn’t need a substitute, and he could
play. The ruse worked and after the ball was out of bounds, he turned to the
field and prepared for the free kick. He was very nervous about it. He thought about
what he practiced. Wayne breathed in, he ran towards the ball, and kicked it
with his brother’s cleats. That moment, he didn’t feel that he had
kicked ball, but a light cloud. The ball went over the wall of players, and
into the top corner of the net. The entire team rushed the field and chanted David,
David, David. He was so happy. In the end, their team had won the tournament,
and his brother was the player who scored the most goals. His brother went to
the head coach and admitted that Wayne scored the last goal. The head coach
asked him to join his brother for receiving the special prize. Somehow he felt
like he has fulfilled something that he couldn’t have done before. Wayne and
David walked into the room to get the special prize.
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This was a great story! I'm so happy it worked out for the best in the end. I'm sure that goal was wonderful. Excellent job, Yuneil! You are an amazing writer and a wonderful person!
ReplyDeleteThank you!!! I like your short story too.
DeleteI really like the story. I play soccer myself, so it is even more interesting for me.
ReplyDeleteThank you!!!
DeleteNice flash fiction story Yuneil! I really like the happy ending. However, I found a little typo.
ReplyDelete"A few days later, the tournament has begun."
It should be "A few days later, the tournament began."
Thank you for correction!!
DeleteNice story man! I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThank you!!!!
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