It was at my last soccer game of the season at
half time, and my team had yet to score in a game against the boys. “I don’t
care if you kill them, I want to see your teeth on the ground,” yelled my
coach. He told us that this game is really important because if we didn’t win
we wouldn’t be able to come back to the best boy’s league next year. As we went
on the field my heart started pounding with excitement and nervousness. I was
new on the team, and this was my chance to prove myself as a good player. Only three
minutes left in the game. The score remained 0-0. I could feel the frustration
in the air, and I decided that it was up to me to change that. “C’mon girls
give it all you got! Don’t give up, we can do it!” I shouted. Suddenly I saw an opportunity when
the center back lost the ball. I took the ball and couldn’t see anything but
the goal and how I wanted the ball to be inside that net. I saw my teammate
open so I gave her a pass and she returned the favor perfectly and at that
point I knew it was my time. I shot the ball and while it was in the air, time
stood still. All I could think was that if it did not go in, it would be my
entire fault and I wasted our one and only chance. I shut my eyes and crossed
my fingers for that perfect goal. All of a sudden I heard a bee buzzing in my
ears. As soon as I opened my eyes to see if I made the shot, I felt a stinger
in my eye. I screamed so loud that I couldn’t tell whether my team was cheering
or not, and I couldn’t see. I felt my legs go out from under me, as someone
knocked me over. I wasn’t sure if it was a teammate or the defender. Slowly my
other eye opened, I saw the long hair of my teammates all around my face. Even
though I couldn’t see, I could still feel the excitement of the game.
Your story is so inspirational, brought tears to my eyes. (get it that's a pun in reference to you being stung in the eye)
ReplyDeleteTHanks love bug :-)
ReplyDeleteI can totally imagine myself in this situation. GREAT STORY (thumbs up)
ReplyDeleteI like the twist a lot. Well written and the ending was not expected.
ReplyDeleteI really like the story. The plot was intriguing and had me on the edge of my seat.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anthime
ReplyDeleteTHank you Javi
you guys are a bunch of sweet people
Thanks Katie appreciate it! :-)
ReplyDeleteGina, I love your story. I like how you described the way you scored the goal. The last two sentences are beautiful! I enjoyed reading your story. Good job!
ReplyDeleteTHANKS SO DEEP :-)
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