I look around me, how did I end up in the midst of these
scary, pale green looking creatures, with a big, heavy, metal gun in my hand?
All this is so different from playing behind that nice, large computer screen
operating the same gun with the remote control. Is this real? Was I really
pulled into the screen, or was the screen pulled into my mind?
I hate this game. I never even noticed these creatures had such
long, sharp, yellow, and bloody teeth. This scenery is making me sick.
And yet, it is so addictive, or should I say, was so addictive. Even at my young age,
I find it so entertaining to shoot zombies, aliens, strange creatures, kill
people with tanks and guns, and to be a superhero. When I get out of this
world, if I get out of this world, I
will never lay my hands on the remote that led me into this mess; it’s too
dangerous.
Why am I thinking of what I would do when I get back? I must
stay focused. For now, I must think of these creatures around me, and how to
escape from them. The air is starting to feel cold and dark. A thick, heavy fog
approaches, and I realize the creatures have glowing red eyes when they are
within it. Suddenly, I feel even more terrified, my heart is beginning to race,
and I am beginning to doubt myself, thinking I can’t escape them. What if I die
with the strike of one sharp, painful claw? Will I get another life, like when
I was playing on the large, 22 inch computer screen around twenty minutes ago?
I never noticed how violent this game was before I ended up here.
But why did I end up here? What did I do wrong? Everyone
plays this game when they have the chance, why am I any different?
This must be a sign from God. Mom always tells me that God
has blessed us with the ability to think and understand, and it would be such a
waste to spend our time, money, and brains on these silly computer games, full
of violence and killing. Have I misused God’s blessings? I am beginning to
understand now, and…WAIT, I still need to get out of here!
As the creatures crawl closer to me, a number of them even
on me, I notice something strong bugging my left eye. I turn around, and I see
a small ray of light from the distance. Is this some kind of illusion? Is this
a dream? Where did it come from? I kick the creatures creeping up my legs, lift
up my gun, and attempt to shoot one of the creatures out of my way. Although I
miss its head, because the gun is bigger and heavier than I am, I still manage
to shoot it in the leg, and it falls to the ground. I look at it one last time,
before it vanishes into thin air, and I begin running towards the light. I am
running as fast as I can; trying to move my frozen legs. The suit I am wearing
is so heavy; it is almost impossible to walk with. I can hear the creatures
going crazy behind me, but I can’t take the risk and look back, they will get
me if I do. The closer I get to the light, the brighter it becomes, and the
thick, choking fog slowly vanishes.
Could this light be…the exit? I must try to reach it; I
can’t afford to stay here any longer. I want to see my family again, and I
promise I’ll listen to my mom. I just hope I can reach it before these
creatures catch up to me. Please, God, make this the exit, please. I promise I
will do my chores. I will listen to mom, and I will be much more careful about
the blessing which you have given me.
As I continue running towards the light, I turn around to
see if the creatures are still on my trail, but they are not. I stop, catch my
breath, and look around me; the speck of light suddenly begins to soar towards
the direction where the creatures are. This time, I do not follow it. Soon
enough, the darkness returns. The creatures are all gone. There is no light. I
am all alone.
Barrie, Krieg. Man Trapped in Computer. Digital image. GoodSalt. N.p., n.d. Web. 09 Dec. 2013.
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