*BEEP* The sounds of my bare feet pounding
against the floor echo as I sprint from the bedroom across the bleak hallway,
this place is unfamiliar, an endless jungle-maze of white corridors and static
rooms. *BEEP* The blinding light reflects off the all-white hallway
forcing me to squint. I run with my hand grazing the wall so that I can
distinguish the doors from the walls, a small bump is sign enough for me to
make a sharp turn into the nearest room to my left. Using my momentum I grab
hold of the door and lurch myself in as quickly as possible, the only colour in
the room comes from some yellow sunflowers sitting on the bedside table. *BEEP*
He’s getting closer I can feel it. Nothing’s told me what his intentions are, but I
know I’m in danger; fear pulses through my body with each hushed gasp for air.
No sounds come from outside, I cant stay in one place, cant allow myself to get
comfortable. *BEEP* I harness my fear and use the adrenaline to propel
myself down the nearly identical hallway frantically scanning my surroundings
for the tell-tell sign of the shadow of a door, my next temporary safe haven.
My search is unsuccessful; these walls are
endless, no opportunity for escape. It’s freezing cold, but my chest and legs
are burning. I’m trapped. Just for a second, I close my eyes and picture laying
down and falling asleep, a quick rest, I’ve probably out run him by now, I’m
sure ill be fine. I open them again; my legs are giving up on me. The powerful
smell of bleach is overwhelming, burning my eyes. Up ahead I notice an opening
that jerks to the right. I slow my pace giving myself time to decide what
option I should take. *BEEP* I come to a complete stop in front of the opening, looking back and forth between escape and
capture. This is where I falter, where I make my
mistake. I didn’t know what I was running from, but right here is when the
faceless shadow pushes me.
By the time my body has fallen away from
the pressure of his hands, I have already planned my temporary escape and
prepared myself for the shock of the walls impact, but my spine never feels the
uncomfortable coldness of the white ceramic tiles. Instead I am consumed by a
vast darkness. The cold leaves the soles
of my feet and I begin my plummet into the dark abyss. I’m moving too
quickly to be able to make out any of my surroundings, the rush of wind passing
by my ears disorientates me, and all I can do is observe the peculiar shapes
and shadows that pass me as I fall. Waving my arms around in despair, I reach
out for anything to slow or even steady my fall. I feel small in this infinite
darkness, vulnerable, scared.
It feels like I’ve been falling for an eternity,
tense muscles in my shoulders and legs relax, and I start to enjoy this feeling
of falling, the air pushing against my back, forcing an arch. If I concentrate
hard enough I can convince myself that I’m actually floating, suspended in
space. As I float in this euphoric state, I accept that I no longer have any
control, there is simply nothing more I can do to divert the path of my fate…
I’ve become numb to the cold; trust cocoons around me like a tightly wrapped
blanket. Then, as if by chance, I hit something. It creaks beneath me,
adjusting to the new weight of my body, but like an organism rejecting foreign
bacteria the boundless net shoots me back up. Again I fall, but this time I
hurriedly roll off, expecting to keep falling into the darkness. Instead, I hit
a hard flat surface and am greeted by my own reflection. The lack of light
makes it hard to see my features; the empty silhouette of my body follows me as
I aimlessly wander around. I look up and see the speck of light where I must’ve
fallen from. Then a new kind of darkness overcomes me and I lose consciousness.
I jolt awake, gasping for air, sucking in
fumes of bleach that burn my throat. The bright white light looms above me, and
every few seconds a faint *beep* pulls
me out of my panic. There are tubes coming out of my arm connected to what
seems to be a sack of water. Now that my eyes have adjusted I notice yellow
sunflowers to my left. Gentle rays of sun leak through the window, catching
specks of dust as they aimlessly float around. A soothing hum fills in the gaps
between the beeps; my head twists around in response to a faintly familiar sound…
“She’s awake, she’s awake. Patient 2520
has broken from comatose! Reactivate the suppressor!”
The door swings open. Men and women in white
coats flood into the room. Every eye attentively observing. And even under the
mental asylums blinding lights, I was in the dark.
Sammie. I enjoyed reading your story so much!
ReplyDeleteSamuel, I loved your story!!!
ReplyDeleteBut one small thing: in the first paragraph I found some apostrophe mistakes. (cant --> can't)
Saaaammie amazing story. Blew me away!
ReplyDeleteSam Jam, what diverse story. The story was quite engrossing... but I got to confess.. BEEP stood for what? Foot steps? A little confused, Sam Jam. In a large extent, your story was astonishing, astounding, surprising, stunning, staggering, shocking, startling, stupefying, and breathtaking.
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